PICA's: Porfolio for writting III

Student ID: 08172

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	Essay1-01a: letter to host family	2009.04.16	5	272	0	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	Essay1-01b: letter to host family	2009.6.10	6	281	0	0	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	Essay1-02a: University life	2009.5.27	5	302	0	0	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Essay 1-02b: University life	2009.6.24	5	308	5	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Essay 1-03a: Stitch and Lilo II	2009.6.12	2	300	0	0	0	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Essays1-03b:Stitch and LiloII	2009.7.12	6	359	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	29	1822	5	0	0	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

Essay 1-02b: University life ; I writed down my opinion well. Over writing this essay, I pondered hard.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	"Essay1-02b: What on earth is the BEST university life???"	July 1, 2009 10:02 AM	31	I put a short comment words, but it has my opinion.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	"Night View☆"	2009/05/17 20:38	18	It is unique.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	"Essay 1-02b: University life"	2009/07/01 9:46	18	She gave me advice.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	"What I addicted to@_@!!"	2009/04/22 10:08	14	Chikako found my blog in this put.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009/04/22 15:06	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	23	I told about my blog.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

...Top of left sode. I think it is easy to look.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

I have to respond comment.
I have to comment for classmates' blog.

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Chicken Licken	2009.4.13	205	0
BR 1-02	UFOs-ORDINARY OR ALIEN	2009.4.19	175	0
BR 1-03	How Elephants Lost Their Wings	2009.4.22	138	0
BR 1-04	SLOW DOWN, Mrs Brown!	2009.5.01	132	0
BR 1-05	Making a Fruit Salad	2009.5.08	98	0
BR 1-06	Cheese-Rolling RACES	2009.5.08	85	0
BR 1-07	The RUNAWAY PANCAKE	2009.5.10	112	0
BR 1-08	More Macdonalds	2009.5.17	112	0
BR 1-09	FLUFFY'S VALENTINES	2009.5.23	207	0
BR 1-10	Biscuit Finds a Friend	2009.5.27	103	0
BR 1-11	Moon Bubble	2009.6.10	210	0
BR 1-12	New York Caf'e	2009.6.10	69	0
	Ben and the GHOST	209.6.24	87	0
	ON THE TEAM	2009.7.01	84	0






---	---	Totals:	1817	0

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

Br1-01: UFOs-ORDINARY OR ALIEN ; It has introduction and conclution with body, and I writed my opinion well.

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	√
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	√
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	√
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	√
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	√
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	√
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	√
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		√
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		√
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		√
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	√
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?		√
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	√
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	√
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? _42__ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		√
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? _0__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __0_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ---I haven't included any media.	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

...Yellow is communication color, so I chiced this seat.
...My format is symple, because it is easy to read for other.
...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

...It has been hard to use the computer.
...Most of my essays was shorter then other classmates.
...Excuse me to write a essay seeing wrong movie

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

...I can do write more! Break my leg!
...Includ introduction and conclution everytime I write essay
...Put my opinion

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

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Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Porfolio for writting III