Friday, July 31, 2009

Thoght of Health in U.S.

1.Introduction
Today, “Metabo” is often being heard among the Japanese, and they worry about life-style related disease. I think that Japanese foods have low calories; Western foods are heartier than Japanese one and have high calories. However I have heard “U.S is developed country of diet.” Social situation in U.S looks like that of Japan; there are busy office workers, full of foods and a lot of new technology. Therefore I’ll study how U.S. takes measure about healthy of people.


2. Excise in U.S.
Most of American likes sports. Football and basketball are popular in professional world. Not only athletes, civilian have an idea that I keep healthy by myself. In my opinion, they do take care by their selves not to be sick because one-fifth Americans don’t carry insurance. It is more healthy and economical. At the sports gym, sales men had excised before, but recently elder people do, too. In addition to many people do excise walking (EXW), especially in New Yoke. In 1980’s, in New York, sneakers fashioned and many people had been jogging by excise boom. Today, walking is more popular than jogging, because walking is easy to start and, not to tire us. It don’t so get on top our feet. EXW arrived Japan 10 years ago.


3. Diet in U.S.
Japanese food boom change their diet. American used to drink coffee and black tea before, but recently they drink green tea. They like strong taste, so they have put honey or sugar. Otherwise they drink just green tea nowadays. Government also takes measure. It obliges to show content of trans-fat on processed food. Moreover it is also interesting to attend healthy style among pets. Content of vitamin in feeds was increased.


4. Health for children
There are problems; drinking, taking drag, HIV, smoking and reducing physical ability among the young not only in Japan but also in U.S. Then, U.S. government showed『Health People 2000』as a national framework for health policy. It says to prolong healthy life style term, reduce difference on health and use preventive service for all nations. I feel adults try to protect not only own health but also children’s one.


5. Interview to Foreign student
There were more the fat in U.S. than Japan, because they eat high calories foods. They don’t take grain every time, and there are no sweet breads like melon-pan and cream-pan. In spite of them, they eat cake and muffin.
Half of student use school gym and, in Montana, they ski and skate in winter.


6. Conclusion
I’ll conclude with three points. First, I compared thought of health in U.S. and that in Japan. I feel that health situation in U.S is resemble that in Japan. Today, in Japan, a lot of people worry about fat, but not all people excise and take healthy food. I had thought American take care for their health more than Japanese before I asked an American. I saw American students excising in the gym in my school. When I asked the student, he said some people often go MacDonald, and eat snacks. I feel there are hardly differences. However, people take care more than past, in both countries.
Next I found that U.S. and Japan send ideas or information each other. Excise is exposed from U.S. and foods were done from Japan. It is interesting. I think they are in good relationship in health. It is better not to exchange in the two countries, but to spread all over the world. In my opinion, trans-fat are used anywhere, and it is not good for everyone.
At last, Japanese stores have feed which reflect pets’ heath, too. It means that nation afford to take care for their pets. Not all countries has health feed and good treat for pets. In addition to, I have an idea that pets are fat because the owners give feed a lot. I have never seen fat wild animal. It is better to keep the pets to be like live in nature.
I pounded my studies after it. I think that it is better to enjoy keeping health, because it continues for any years. I like excise and eating, so I’m interested in health, and enjoyed this survey. Thanks for this, I got new information, for example, walking is better than running. Health is importance for people, because we can’t anything without it, so I want many people to enjoy keeping own health. I studied just about health in U.S., so I want to learn about that in the other countries. It may give me something news. (767 words)

Sunday, July 26, 2009

All Stars Game☆

All Stars Game was held on 24th and 25th. It was a baseball game which players selected by their fan and baseball players do. The players were classified Pacific and Central. I hoped Pacific team win, because it had players my favorite team, Hawks. However at the first game in Sapporo, Central team won. Pacific had leaded since the 8th inning, but Aoki in Central team hit 2 run homerun!! I was shocked, but I was little happy because I like him♡ As you know, he is a good player and rustled at WBC.
At the second game in Hiroshima, Pacific team won☆ The game was so exciting!! Each team hit well. Matsunaka in Pacific, and Hawks hit homerun 2 times! Then he got MVP. He is from Kumamoto, so I support him. I am really proud of him. My favorite player, Kawasaki, Settsu and Sugiuchi played, too. It was very fun☆

On 22th, this magazine “Monthly HAWKS” was sold.
It runs a feature on Kawasaki. I stayed at late to read it without studying before exams…
Why don’t you read it after exam!

I have 6 other exam. I feel this exams was not good result..I do my best!!(203 words)

Friday, July 17, 2009

Driving License!

I got a drivers’ license!! In fact, I took the examination before, but I failed(+_+;) I was really depressed, so I studied hard yesterday. This exam is so difficult for me, and I thought that I fait again…. But I passed it!!!
Moreover my friend, I went there with her, passes, too☆

I'll go drive this summer♪
Would you go with me?! Of cause I'll drive! (68 words)

Monday, July 13, 2009

Day off

I met my old friends. We had lunch at Kourante, which I shoe you before. I ate stewed pork with rice. It was so soft, but there were two slices of it. I wanted them more. Then I went to karaoke after eating doughnuts. I hadn’t gone there for more than a month, so I ‘m pained my gullet today. However I enjoyed those with my friends.

I don’t have to take care for them. I get to take easy. I’ll do my best for exam and reports because I got to charge from them. (95 words)

Sunday, July 12, 2009

Essays1-03b:Stitch and LiloII

The theme is that love has more power than dead. In my opinion, sometime power of love is strong, and helps us. However sadly you are, you can refine by someone you love. I also think we find that he or she is importance for me when they have gone. I was recalled those things by this movie. So I thought about power of love.

Lilo had a hula contest, and she have to think everything about what she dances. She had pondered so hard with Stitch, but they hadn’t gotten good idea. They traveled to found the theme.

At last, at a gas stand, they heard an ethnic song. It has a story. A beautiful woman and a cool man fall in love, but the goddess of fire threw into a volcano by her jealous. The woman found his body, and she paid for his relive. She wished sincerely, at finally he relived!! Lilo wanted to express that. Although she and Stitch have practiced together, oddly Stitch changed badly some time.

At rehearsal for the contest, Stitch rampaged and scared others. Nobody watched her hula. Lilo was angry against Stitch. Stitch was sorry and tried to be good boy. However Stitch didn’t. His power was losing.

At the contest Lilo danced alone, but she stopped dancing run away because she worried about Stitch. She looked for Stitch, and her sister, her boyfriends, Stitch’s colleagues also did. Stitch wasn’t. Stitch doesn’t want to scare other, so he want to go anywhere no one stay. But in the way, the ship which Stitch driving fall down! Additionally, at once Stitch completely lost his power and dead. Every one cried. Lilo was sorry. Then Stitch relived. Lilo’s love has more power than death of Stitch.

We are headstrong and forget to care other some time. I fell that it is no problem because we cannot help doing to do my best one thing. Importance is to love others. We can live without other as you know. We hardly relive down to earth. However sadness someone dead is healed by others. I thought that after the movie.(359 words)

Friday, July 10, 2009

Curry and rice♪



I like curry and rice very much. Especially, the curry my mother cooks is the best. So I learned how to cook it from her before. She puts beef nerve which stewed for about an hours, and often used this curry roux.→
I hove no time to stew beef nerve and no one, so I put chicken. There were some vegetable; eggplant, pepper and corn in my freezer and onion. I put them. My favorite curry has little vegetables, so I cut them so hard. I stewed my curry for a long time. It was so good curry. I was sure that I am a good chef.(^u^)
I want to cook curry for my mother♡(118words)


Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Porfolio for writting III

Student ID: 08172

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)


Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase

Short titles with links to blog posts

Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W

C

L

P

M

1-01a (2009.04.08)

Essay1-01a: letter to host family

2009.04.16

5

272

0

0

0

0

1-01b (2009.04.20)

Essay1-01b: letter to host family

2009.6.10

6

281

0

0

0

0

(1-01c)









1-02a (2009.06.01)

Essay1-02a: University life

2009.5.27

5

302

0

0

0

0

1-02b (2009.07.06)

Essay 1-02b: University life

2009.6.24

5
308

5

0

0

0

(1-02c)









1-03a (2009.06.29)

Essay 1-03a: Stitch and Lilo II

2009.6.12

2

300

0

0

0

0

1-03b (2009.07.13)


Essays1-03b:Stitch and LiloII

2009.7.12

6

359

0

0

0

0

Totals

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29

1822

5

0

0

0


Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

2.0. Comments

Showcase

Titles of posts with links

Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd

Numbers of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*





2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

"Essay1-02b: What on earth is the BEST university life???"

July 1, 2009 10:02 AM

31

I put a short comment words, but it has my opinion.

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

"Night View☆"

2009/05/17 20:38

18

It is unique.

2.4. Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd

Total number of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

"Essay 1-02b: University life"

2009/07/01 9:46

18

She gave me advice.

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

"What I addicted to@_@!!"

2009/04/22 10:08

14

Chikako found my blog in this put.

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2009/04/22 15:06

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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23

I told about my blog.






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • ...Top of left sode. I think it is easy to look.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • I have to respond comment.

  • I have to comment for classmates' blog.




3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase

Short titles
with links

Dates: yyyy.mm.dd

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

2007.05.16

39

1

BR 1-01

Chicken Licken

2009.4.13

205

0

BR 1-02

UFOs-ORDINARY OR ALIEN

2009.4.19

175

0

BR 1-03

How Elephants Lost Their Wings

2009.4.22

138

0

BR 1-04

SLOW DOWN, Mrs Brown!

2009.5.01

132

0

BR 1-05

Making a Fruit Salad

2009.5.08

98

0

BR 1-06

Cheese-Rolling RACES

2009.5.08

85

0

BR 1-07

The RUNAWAY PANCAKE

2009.5.10

112

0

BR 1-08

More Macdonalds

2009.5.17

112

0

BR 1-09

FLUFFY'S VALENTINES

2009.5.23

207

0

BR 1-10

Biscuit Finds a Friend

2009.5.27

103

0

BR 1-11

Moon Bubble

2009.6.10

210

0

BR 1-12

New York Caf'e

2009.6.10

69

0


Ben and the GHOST

209.6.24

87

0


ON THE TEAM

2009.7.01

84

0































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Totals:

1817

0


Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.



4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase

Yes

No

4.1. Does your blog display an archive?

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4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

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4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

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4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

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5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):

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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

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  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

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  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)


√

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)


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  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)


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  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")

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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?


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  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts

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    • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

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4.3. Links & media

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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?

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  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?

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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • _42__ posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?


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  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • _0__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?


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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • __0_ posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

---I haven't included any media.


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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)

    2. ... (short link, date)

    3. ... (short link, date)


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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. ...Yellow is communication color, so I chiced this seat.

  2. ...My format is symple, because it is easy to read for other.

  3. ...



5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • ...It has been hard to use the computer.

  • ...Most of my essays was shorter then other classmates.

  • ...Excuse me to write a essay seeing wrong movie



6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • ...I can do write more! Break my leg!

  • ...Includ introduction and conclution everytime I write essay

  • ...Put my opinion


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  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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Monday, July 6, 2009

Summer vegetable


My family sent me a lot of vegetables; tomato, eggplants, corns, green peppers and cucumbers. They were grown by my grand-pa and grand-ma, and they were so flesh!! Green peppers and corns were good smell and eggplants were beautiful.
I cooked the vegetables. I had thin wheat noodles with summer vegetables at lunch. At dinner, I ate summer vegetables soup. I keep other vegetables in a freezer. Many summer vegetables will make me beautiful☆ (75 words)

Le.Passage

On Saturday, I had lunch with my friends at Le. Passage. One of my friends knows good restaurants well, so she took us the restaurant. I had pumpkin soup, grilled pork, something by eggplant, salad and bake. All they were good. Especially pumpkin soup was great♡ It was great. I enjoyed eating them, and talking with my friends.
The restaurant is in Suidocho. If you are interested in it, tell me. I’ll show you! (75 words)


Friday, July 3, 2009

Coca Cola seats☆

I watched the game; Hawks vs. Buffalos in the coca cola seat. Do you know coca cola seats?! The seats is the nearest from players. We watch the game without net. It was very exciting!! Hawks lost the game, but I was satisfied. Because I could sit the coca cola seat and watched my favorite player; Kawasaki, Settsu, Mahara and Matsuda play☆ They were cool (♡u♡!! Of cause, other players were good, too!
My friend and I went to Yahoo! dome after classes, and came back to Kumamoto at midnight. It was hard, but I really enjoyed.
Hawks won Fighters, and top in Pa-league!! I wish Hawks win top this season. Hawks can do (^^)P” (119words)

Wednesday, July 1, 2009

BR1-14: ON THE TEAM


I had played basketball as I was in precious school. My coach shouted like Coach Wilson. I was not good player like Jamie, but I enjoyed playing it like the basketball team. Of curse we speak Japanese, so I learn how to say in the game in the story. For example, although I thought we say “goal” when we throw the ball into the hoop, they said it “shoot”. In my opinion, it is a good way to repair own English over playing sports. (84 words)