Essay2-02b Website Reviwe Revision

I want to write about my study on websites. I found them about my favorite actor, Cameron Diaz, and Halloween. The reason why I study about them is that I’m interested in both of them, and I want knowledge about them. I learn Cameron’s life, and Halloween is like Japanese obon.

At first, I’ll talk about Cameron Diaz. I admire her. Since her smile is charming, I can’t believe she is 30 years old over. I want to know source of her attraction. I found her smile was well.

According to the website I found, she was called “Skeletor”, because her smile infected others. I felt she has capable to make other smile. I want smile like her.

The website also says that she left home at 16 age, and live in about five countries; Japan, Australia, Mexico, Morocco and France. I envy her. But coming the chance like this, I can’t challenge. I also have an anxiety to go alone. I will be lonely. She is a good challenger. I feel she has become a big star because of invaluable experiences.

I found Cameron got many prize more than I predicted. For example, she was chosen by Empire magazine as one of the “100sexuest Stars” in film history in 1995. And People Magazine chose her as one of the “50 Most Beautiful” people in the world in 1998. People all over the world seem to feel she is beauty and affective.

Next I’ll explain about Halloween. Halloween is coming soon! I long for Halloween parade to dress-up and walk around saying “Trick or treat”. I have never done yet. I don’t know about it well, so I learn.

A website about Halloween tell us object of Halloween, each counties’ traditional of Halloween and so on. It says Halloween is All Hollows Eve. The day, on November 1st, is an important date on the Catholic calendar. I have understood Christmas is a Christian event, but I found Halloween is, too. Therefore Halloween provides all over the world. Each countries seem to have different traditional. It is interesting. I want to try to visit these countries on the day!

Halloween is a time to observe and honor saints. People believed that the souls of the dead come back to earth to visit their families or friends on Nov.1. I feel this is similar with Japanese obon. On the day, Japanese light Japanese lanterns. On Halloween, lanterns made from pumpkin are lighted. Don’t you feel they are similar?

I think Halloween has exciting a ceremony whish obon doesn’t have. It is to dress-up and walk around the town asking “Trick or treat”, I said before. The parade is to discourage and frighten away these spirits. They believe the spirits are evils. While Japanese believe spirits are our ancestors, and my family. So I think we don’t have noisy ceremony like Halloween. (479 words)

Essay2-02a Website Review

I want to write about my study on websites.

At first, about Cameron Diaz. I admire her. Since her smile is charming, I can’t believe she is 30 years old over. I want to know source of her attraction. I found her smile was well.

As a child, she was called "Skeletor," because of her infection smile. She has capable to make other smile. I want smile like her.

She left at 16, and live at about 5 countries; Japan, Australia, Mexico, Morocco and Paris. I envy her. Bur coming the chance like this, I can’t challenge. I also have an anxiety to go alone. I will be lonely. She is a good challenger. I feel those invaluable experiences have formatted what she is.

Cameron got many prizes. For example, she was chosen by Empire magazine as one of the “100sexuest Stars” in film history in 1995. And People Magazine chose her as one of the “50 Most Beautiful” people in the world in 1998.

Next I’ll explain about Halloween. Halloween is coming soon! I long for Halloween parade to dress-up and walk around saying “Trick or treat”. I have never done yet. I don’t know about it well, so I learn.

Halloween is All Hollows Eve. The day, on November 1st, is an important date on the Catholic calendar. I have understood Christmas is a Christian event, but I found Halloween is, too. Therefore Halloween provides all over the world. The website I fond says each countries have different traditional. It is interesting. I want to try to visit these countries on the day!

Halloween is a time to observe and honor saints. Then people believed that the souls of the dead come back to earth to visit their families or friends on Nov.1. I feel this is like Japanese obon. On the day, Japanese light Japanese lanterns. On Halloween, lanterns made by pumpkin are lighted. It is quite similar, I feel.

I think Halloween has exciting a ceremony whish obon doesn’t have. It is to dress-up and walk around the town asking “Trick or treat”, I said before. The parade is to discourage and frighten away these spirits. They believe the spirits are evils. While Japanese believe spirits are our ancestors, and my family. So in my opinion we don’t have noisy ceremony like Halloween.

On website, there are huge information. More and more I search on net, more and more I got new knowledge. (408words)




http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000139/
Having many imformation about her, it is intrestiong.

http://www.jackolanterns.net/index.htm
Helloween looks so exciting.

BR1-11: New York Caf'e

It is not interested for me…
The story tells to prevent poor persons. I understand that it is important. But a man sent e-mail t to the President “Give money and sandwiches for poor people or missiles all come down the next day.” What dreadful it is!! I hope peaceful world for all people on the earth.


I might feel author’s thought incorrectly, so my review is not good. (69 words)

BR1-10: Moon Bubble

It is news!! A boy went to the moon at the first time. Moreover he went and backed with alone without any apace ship. How mystery story!

When he went to camp with his family, he was using a metal detector. Having beeped by the river, he dug and found a metal. It was like an egg and shiny. Nobody knows what it was. At the nigh, after his family slept, he was stared by campfire. Suddenly it jumped right out of his hand! A tiny arm popped out the top of the metal then shining bubble began to grow out of the metal arm. The bubble got bigger and bigger. He reached out to touch the bubble, his through its surface. The bubble moving, he tried to run, but I tripped and ended up falling into the bubble. He and the bubble zoomed off into the night sky. Up and up them, until he could see the Earth. At last he got to the moon☆

He said that no one believe his story. I think so. It is unbelievable. Yet it is wonderful to visit the moon with no money. I want the metal. If I go to the moon, I would take pictures and show to NASA. (210 words)

BR1-08: FLUFFY'S VALENTINES

Fluffy is a guinea pig, he is had in the class of Ms.Day. He is fondled by the class. The day before Valentine’s Day, students were decorated Valentine’s boxes to show what they love. Fluffy thought that they love him, so he expected them to decorate the boxes for him. Yet they showed a pink ribbon, a famous runner, a shark and so on, but Jasmine and Wade decorated their box for Fluffy! There was an apple in the box.
After then, another class student came the class and said that Fluffy smells funny, so the classmate took her bath. At first he squealed and squealed, but Emma made it stop. He felt good in the tub. He became to like taking bath. He smelled like a shampoo.
On Valentine’s Day, he met a guinea pig from Mr. Lee. He was bad pig. He ate Fluffy’s apple and do what fluffy warn not to do, so they didn’t get along.

The story is funny. The students are very kind. I think Fluffy is happy. It is hard to have pets, but it is good for the student to have pets. The reason is to cherish animals and lives. I think it is better Fluffy to be flexible. (207 words)

BR1-07: More Macdonalds

When I saw the title, I thought that the story is about Macdonald as the hamburger shop. In fact, Macdonald is family name, and there are no hamburgers.

The story is that building extra rooms at Macdonald because the house was too small to live the family. Jojo and Mouse, they are twins and share room, wanted a new room, and they never yield each other. One night Mouse couldn’t sleep. He recalled about living enjoy at their old room. At last he decided Jojo to have a new room.

It is a heartwarming story. The story made me think about brothers and sisters, because I have a brother and a sister. (112 words)

BR1-06: The RUNAWAY PANCAKE

The story is that everyone chased a pancake. One day a mother was cooking pancakes for breakfast. When she tossed the first pancake, it jumped right out of the pan and rolled out of the door. It didn’t want to be eaten. The family chased it. While the pancake escaped them, other animal also chased it. They wanted to eat it. When the pancake wanted into the forest, it met a pig. Then it asked to help it, but the pig didn’t it. And the pig ate the pancake!!

I was scared. The pancake talked with the pig, but the pig didn’t hear it and eat it! I can’t eat my friends(>_<;; (112 words)

BR1-05: Cheese-Rolling RACES

The name of race “Cheese Rolling races” sounds good! I want to race. However it is dangerous and hard unexpectedly. They run down so steep hill-Cooper’s Hill that they can’t keep running. In past, 30 people were injured in an accident at the race. Nevertheless the race keeps on hold, and the crowds keep on cheering, the competitors keep on running. The writer asked us “Are they crazy?!” I don’t think so, because they enjoy it! I want to run down the hill with cheese!!(85 words)

BR1-04: Making a Fruit Salad

I like fruit salad, and it’s getting warm so I want to eat it more. According to this book, it isn’t difficult to make fruit salad. Get an apple, a banana, a pear, an orange and grapes. Cut the apple and the pear. Peel the banana and the orange, and cut them. Put them and grapes in a bowl. Put some sugar and some lemon juice on the fruit. Then mix up all the fruit in the bowl. That’s all.
It is so easy that I want to cook it.
Photos in the book look delicious very much.(98 words)

BR1-03: SLOW DOWN, Mrs Brown!

I read “SLOW DOWN, Mrs. Brown!” because I was attracted its title and its picture. The story is about a woman. She liked to walk down her street to the shops. One day, she got a motorized scooter, so she went to the shops by it. She liked going fast! She drove reckless in all over the town. Everyone in the town was surprised and angry. They went to her, and said “Slow down, Mrs. Brown!!” She reflected on her drive, and she never drove reckless.・・・But she raced her scooter at night!
I think it is valuable to live with doing what I want, so it is nice! However I mustn’t trouble for other. We have some rules to avoid troubles. We have to obey it for us.(132 words)

BR1-02: How Elephants Lost Their Wings

I haven’t known why elephants don’t have wings. When I looked this title, I was wondered　about it.
Long ago, elephants had wings, and they enjoyed flying. However they broke trees and houses when they flew. Looking them, the gods thought to have to stop them. They invited elephants to a grand feat, and the elephants ate a lot. Their tummies were full, they slept. While their sleeping, the gods took away their wings. The elephants were angry, but they got wings never.
I pitied them, but we can’t leave safety if they have had wings now. I thought that the gods consider on leave together with animals or fish and so on in peace. But some animals were exterminated by us; human begins. We must stop them, or the gods will take away our hands or feet.(138 words)

Br1-01: UFOs-ORDINARY OR ALIEN

I believe the existence of UFOs, and I’m interested in them, so I read this book.
There are many ideas about UFOs among people who don’t believe them. For example, they are light from Earth, stars planet or meteors, hoaxes. However there are some sightings In U.S. or Australia, and so on. And aircraft pilot saw them, too. They know the skies well, so I’m sure of what they said.
In the UFOs, are there alien? We don’t know, and we haven’t seen them. In this book, there are billion of planets in the universe, so the chances are high that there will be life on another planet. But because if we flew to the closest galaxy in our own space ships, it would take us about 75000years, many people don’t believe. I think there are alien anywhere and want to see them. I have an idea that they have space ships faster than ours, and their technology has advanced.
There are many theories about UFOs, but nobody knows truth. It is interested for me.(175 words)

BR1-00: Chicken Licken

Chicken was scared of everything. One day, when he went to the wood, and he stopped by an oak tree, a tiny acorn dropped from the tree and hit his head. He didn’t see it, and he thought that the sky must be falling! Then he concerned to tell the king. While he was going to the king, he told birds on the farmyard that the sky must be falling. They believed that and went to the king. O the way, They saw Foxy Loxy; he is a fox. Chicken Licken told him that. He didn’t think so, but he didn’t say to them. Foxy Loxy said that he knew a shortcut. He took them his hole, and he was gobbling them all up. Just then a acorn dropped on Foxy Loxy’s head. He didn’t it. He looked up the sky, and he scared that the sky must be. Because the birds looked that they found out Chicken Licken was done, too.
“Chicken Licken” is a funny tail and told us something. I learned from it that it is important to believe others, but confirming by myself, is also important. I am hasty, so I have to be careful not to be like Chicken Licken.(205 word)